Senior Portrait in beautiful SoCal Light
Derek Lofgreen

Senior Portrait in beautiful SoCal Light

Thanks for the comments and input on the first two. I think the first one could us a bit of a crop and I am always open to suggestions. This is the last I will post of this session.
Location
San Diego
Equipment Used
Mamiya 645, 80mm F2.5
Exposure
1/30 @ F2.5 ish
Film & Developer
Kodak E100G
Paper & Developer
scan
The image appears on my screen to be about 5-10pts too blue. Once the blue cast is gone you'll probably need some magenta as well. I'd also increase the density a bit as well. Doing this will bring out her skin, make the edge light on her shoulder and hair pop and possibly make the background a hair more interesting. As a composition I think it is pretty good. The thing in the background behind her shoulder and ear (her foot?) is a bit distracting and her hands look a bit odd, but these are essentially knits, not in any way show stoppers.

Hope that helps.

jdc
 

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