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A picture taken a few weeks ago using studio flash. Curious about your comments....

Mark
www.zwartwit.org
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Mamiya 645 pro
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not recorded
Film & Developer
Delta 400 + AM74
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Forte PWT
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none
wow, really interesting Mark

in many ways this image is done 'wrong', but hey it's very interesting, beautifully lit and perfectly presented

so, what's 'wrong'
a beautiful model lying on the floor in a sexy black dress, yep, but not usually like this

the portrait convention of face toward camera so we see the eyes, not here, but it works really well

hand stretched out in front, may be it could detract from the face, but oh no, here it creates a beautiful diagonal line through to the face then the legs

and i love the legs, i'm a leg man from forever, these are slender, great ankles and perfectly softened by great use of dof

great image, well done
 
Sorry, I'm having some problems with this image: The bacground tone is too uneven for me, I see a bit of a halo around the models head, and the black dress loses a lot of detail.
 

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sem5.jpg
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Date taken
Sun, 15 October 2006 3:13 AM
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