Sarah #2

Dave101,
I am bothered by the eyes looking away. But more so by the light on her wrist and hand. They draw my attention away from her face. A simple piece of opaque card board taped to a vertical light stand could be used in front of her just out of view of the camera as "gobo" to cast a bit of shadow on the wrist up to her chin. If the high lite level on the wrist and hand were lowered to match the shadow on her shoulder. The eye would fly directly to her face. I like what you have done, but I think the image needs a bit of work. My thoughts here also apply to the other image, the light reflecting from her arms creates the same or a similar problem for me. Thanks for posting!!! Charlie..................

The only thing which really bothers me about this shot is the bright area of either hair or a bit of ear on the right. Otherwise it's a great capture.

I think this photo will be awsome if it were a little softer.