Sandra and Samuela

Not finding fault, but the excellent image works better for me with the figures more centered in the frame. One of your models seems to talking to the other, the turn of the head leads my eye away from the breaking waves. By masking the screen with my hand covering most of the water works best for me. A beautiful print!


Charlie..................................

I agree with charlie. cropping off the right helps for me...helps create the intimacy the characters suggest.

Tom and Charles, thank you very much for your input.
I could agree with your saying

/ Marcus

Works well for me as it is. The waves are simply a backdrop. The relationship between the two females is all powerful in this scene.

It's a detail only but I am especially drawn to the difference in skin tone between the younger and older females' legs.

There's great balance in this scene.

Actually I haven't seen the difference of their legs until you said so. The light comes from the left side (almost 90 degrees on the left), so maybe Samuela (the left girl) is shading Sandra? On the other hand, Sandra is a bit darker too.

/ Marcus