Rusted tractor
Laurent

Rusted tractor

A tractor left rusting on the side of the road.
Location
Normandy
Equipment Used
Rolleiflex MX-EVS
Exposure
unrecorded
Film & Developer
FP4+ @ 80, Ilfosol 3 1+4 (oups !)
Paper & Developer
Neg scan
Lens Filter
Rollei yellow filter
I do not like the fuzzyness of the lefthand edge in sunlight. By being brightly lit it is, to my eye, quite distracting. I would not print the edge. I would eliminate it entirely. In a verticle motif I would print the remainder of the negative doing some burning to the upper edge...perhaps 25% additional exposure being feathered to nothing by time the top 10% of the print was burned. I would also burn the lower right hand corner to make less prominent the bright high lights.

Again you have used the yellow filter. What was the reason for using it...to lighten the rust on the vertical pipe?
 

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mf031-g-small.jpg
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