Roses

Not sure about this one, is it too busy? I will probably burn some of the backround a bit when printing, but this is a neg scan, no darkroom acess for at least a month... :(
Equipment Used
Shen-Hao FCL-57 w/4x5 back, 210mm Caltar II-N
Exposure
1/6s @ f/16
Film & Developer
Foma 200, PMK Pyro
Paper & Developer
scan.
The texture on those petals is very pleasing to me... What did you scan the negative with? I sure this will make a successful print...


Miles
 
I'd love to see this with the lens wide open front tilt to keep the rose in focus. If possible, you might also consider removing the twig right above the front rose. Very nice texture as mentioned.

A little more contrast too perhaps?

-Anupam
 
MVNelson: A Epson 4870. Yes, I`m sure this neg will print very nicely. I think the texture is from the strong sidelighting(window), and I used a silver reflector to add some light at the "front" of the rose.

Anupam: Thanks for your suggestions.
 

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