Spot out those dust in the sky... unless they are ufo's or actual contrails.
THe foreground could use some actual burning down too, this would draw they are inward.
Of of course throw convention out the window.... what do I know. I am an opinionated SOB.
Thanks,
I'll give a go again today and see how it turn out. I have same negative but taken with -1 and -2 stops down, that might
help to smooth out a little bit the foreground, and hopefully the dust spots won't be there.