River reflections

River reflections

An approx half frame crop of a 35mm neg.
Does this work or is it still to busy? Comments please
Phill
Location
Derbyshire, UK
Equipment Used
Nikon F80
Film & Developer
FP4 in Pyrocat-HD 1:1:400 (Stand)
Paper & Developer
Ilford Multigrade IV
Lens Filter
Split Grade technique
Don
The original neg has a lot more of the overhanging branch which in retrospect detract from the image IMO. Personally I feel it is now quite strong.
Thanks for the comment
Phill
 
Phil, I like the way the reflections get progressively more distorted as your eyes move from left to lower right. Have you considered printing the mid and highlight tones a bit lighter, while keeping the strong blacks, to create an even more graphic feel to the image?
Regards,
Daniel
 

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