This has the very engaging quality of authenticity. Hard to say if it would be improved by seeing more in the blackness of the windows. Photographically, this would be a conventional "plus." But poetically, it may be just right as is. I like it!
Very nice. This is a very desolate and poignant shot. I would be tempted to crop the right hand side (even sacrificing the period after S.D.) It would prevent a bit of distraction to the eye without sacrificing the mood. imho..... Very nice.