Raphaelle
Aurelien

Raphaelle

Equipment Used
Mamiya RB67 + 127 mm
Film & Developer
Rollei Retro 100 Tonal in D76 1+1
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great image.. the lighting, the pose, the expression.. and such an interesting looking woman
 
Diane Lane, hit the nail on the head.

Great shot, definitely has that classic look.
 
If I may give one point of critic: I think this picture would be considerably stronger if you cropped the lower 1/5 of the picture.

That is NOT because of some misguided sense of shame. As an artist, I have drawn from life nudes, so don't have an issue with this... So, why than? Because the quality of light you managed to achieve from the belly upwards is not matched by that lower 1/5th portion of the picture.

Maybe it is because you didn't want to emphasize "it", but by not putting stronger sculpting light on it, the lower 1/5th doesn't "fit-in" with the rest of the picture. It looks "muddy"... So that's "why" :wink:
 
One thing that bothers me in this shot is the hard line across the model's stomach, just below the belly button. From there down, she is darker than from there up. It's almost as if she's been out tanning wearing a top, which her bikini line belies. I understand the desire to emphasize the face and upper body, but I find the sharp line distracting. Perhaps feathering the light? I'm assuming it is the edge of a light and not the model's natural coloring.
 

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Member Album by Aurelien
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untitled-1_796160.jpg
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Date taken
Wed, 08 September 2010 11:05 AM
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632px x 800px

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