I really like the sinuous shape of the flowing water. It's so hard to gauge tonal reproductions from a computer scan. Sharp deliniation of details in the rocks surrounding the graceful smoothness of the water would serve as a nice counterpoint in the print.
Daniel, Thank you for your comments. I think the upper rocks need some more burning to deepen the tones. The print is much nicer than the scan, but I think it will give it better balance.