I posted a neg scan of this a while back. I took some of the comments and finaly got into the darkroom. I know some think the water is to soft, perhaps. Personaly, I think I like the way it looks here. I did crop to a square to remove some offending vegitation. Comments welcome.
I don't think the upper vegitation does anything for you except draw your eye up and out of the image. Hold a card over the top 1"(so you create a tension point of 3/16" where the white(Stump? in center) meets the top edge of photo)and I think it's an improvement. The image is about Beautiful Cold wet Dark rock and cotton-candy splashin' water. Crop it to show that. Is there any more foreground?
Paul,
You know I think your right about the top of the photo. It isn't really needed. There is a tiny bit more at the bottom of the print it was cropped off when I scanned. Not enough to make a difference.