I really like the photo but might have either moved in closer and a bit to the right or crop the current frame to a square and leave out most of the left side of the image, the story is in the center. Not sure if you were looking for critiques but there you go.
No I totally appreciate critiques. Thank you! I'm still working on my "fast framing" and trying to take a more journalistic approach to my images. It's definitely a huge learning curve as I've been primarily a still-life / studio photographer all this time. (IE: Architecture, landscape, product ) I'm just trying to learn a new area.