portrait

I dodged her eyes. Do you think I overdid it. Is it too obvious?

Thank you.
Equipment Used
xd-s 50mm 1.7 rokkor
Film & Developer
hp5 id11
Paper & Developer
scan from print, darkroom
No, it's a sweet portrait. Well done.
 
I think that it is a little overdone, giving the child a scary look which is unsettling for the viewer IMO. I'm looking at the photo and I'm thinking Stephen King.
 
It doesn't look overdone to me, but it's hard to tell from a small jpg. Nice portrait.
 

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