Pitchers
Monophoto

Pitchers

Water pitchers on the Wine Train in Napa Valley
Location
Napa Valley, California
Equipment Used
Nikon FM2, 35-70mm Nikor
Exposure
unrecorded
Film & Developer
TMY, Rodinal 1+200 with minimal agitation
Paper & Developer
negative scan
Nicley done, you have captured the depth and modeling of the pitures very well. May I suggest a crop off the right to remove the out of focus items, and off the left to remove the highlights and window. I think this would strengthen an interesting image further.
 
Great subject matter! I agree on the cropping, I see it very strong in a near square format. I am very impressed at illumination of the silver, in my opinion it is spot on!
Put simply, this is a very well done photograph.

Thanks for posting, Iv'e really enjoyed this one!
 
If it was up to me - and I KNOW it isn't - I'd crop some off the left.
The reflections on the right seem to add depth, and reinforce a vital quality: The "shininess" of the pitchers.
This prove nothing. other that I see things differently.
 
Concentrating on the appearance, the minimal agaiation has produced a good result, full of detail and texture.
 

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Filename
pitchers_small.jpg
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Dimensions
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