Pisa #3

Location
Italy
Equipment Used
OM-2n, Zuiko 35/70mm
Film & Developer
FP4 @ 80ASA, Moersch Tanol N-15%
Paper & Developer
neg.scan
Very interesting shadow play here. I wondered whether the very top of the picture should be cropped. By taking out the edge of the road at the top and the dark shadow section, top left, the picture seems to become more powerful.
Very great possibilities here.
Mick.
 
The juxtaposition of the two people here, pedestrian and cylcist, is excellent. I agree with Mick Fagan about the crop, though...it'll make a much better picture! Also, please consider major burning down of the white blocks on the LRHS... the "whiteness" of them competes in a major way with the much more important elements of this picture. Good eye and well timed!
 

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