Paris, Fondation Luis Vuitton

Location
Paris, France
Equipment Used
Canon EOS 3, Carl Zeiss Ultron 50 F/1.8
Film & Developer
Tmax 400, Rodinal (R09)
Very nice. I really like the mixture of the straight lines in the upper part and the wavy lines in the lower part. The person adds an interesting contrast and focal point. Mooie plaat Ron. Petje af!
 
I'm torn on it. It's interesting but maybe too much going on. As an alternative I'd be tempted to crop the right side just to the right of the far pillar, and crop the bottom at the bottom of the reflection of that pillar in the water, taking out the mess of the water in the picture. Then the water becomes dark, the right wall is eliminated and the focal point becomes the woman and the angled pillars. For me the way it sits, there are just too many focal points, angles and distractions.
 

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