I quite agree with you, and I thank you for you comment: it's with constructive critics that we can improve our skills
this was the first film I developed in Microphen. It was developed in Microphen stock (1+0) and the HP5+ was pushed to 800 ASA.
I did not become fully satisfied with this strategy, that I abandoned immediately. now I still use Microphen, but I dilute it, preferably 1+3. by doing this, in the more recent films, I did no longer observe these stripes