While I think this is a masterful and beautiful print, I would do the unthinkable and elevate it to a much higher level by retouching out, what looks like a bird on the person on the right's head. And I'd be very tempted to take out what looks like a urn in between the center and right person, although I could leave it. Sometimes we need to transcend convention to make "art", and I think that's what is needed here. SOOOO close. I really think that members on APUG in their quest for "purity" do themselves a great disservice in restricting serendipity from blossoming.