Old Dock

Old Dock

A landscape taken on the beach in Juneau, Alaska. These docks used to service a gold mine, which itself now lies in ruins on the shore.
Location
Juneau, Alaska
Equipment Used
F4
Film & Developer
Ilford HP5
A very good composition and great tones. A reminder that civilisation falls and nature continues.
 
...this is the sort scene that I look when out and about, so I studied it a bit and played with cropping...first of all the post on the left is a problem to me as it seems to jut through the roof of the frame, and actually divides the frame in two...I would like to have seen the photo made from a slightly higher angle, hopefully without harming the rest of the perspective, but placing the post within the frame...secondly, as the composition exists, I used a sheet to crop here and there, and came away with the feeling that if the space between the post and the edge were cut in half (even though you'd loose some of the mountain beyond) it would balance better, and actually mitigate the jutting post somewhat. Try it...
 

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