Oak Tree

Oak Tree

Flatbed scan of 8 x 10 FB print, toned in Kodak Brown 1:100 / Selenium
Location
Carmel Valley
Equipment Used
RB67S / 90C
Film & Developer
Ilfosol S
Paper & Developer
MGIV FB NORMAL / P20
Lens Filter
none
This is nice Victor. It fits the frame perfectly, and nice delicate toning too.

Nice One

Regards

Stoo
 
Victor,

Very fine image, however I have a few comments for you.

First, right along the right side of the picture frame, just above the bright area, about center, you have this one dark vertical branch that I find quite distracting from the rest of the image. I feel this should be either cropped slightly, or you can spot the negative to get rid of it.

Second, although not as important is that branch, along the bottom edge, just slightly to the left of the title "oak tree" there is a dark spot in the light grass and is right on the prints edge. I would also crop or spot that out, because little dark or light spots on the edge of the print are usually distracting.

All the best,

Ryan McIntosh
www.RyanMcIntosh.net
 
Nice, Victor. I love these gnarled oaks. Under certain conditions, they can be downright creepy.

All the best,
Daniel
 
Yep those are some wonderful shapes. Wonderful image. - Sean
 

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oak3.jpg
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