Nude 2

Nude 2

Equipment Used
Bronica GS-1
Film & Developer
Tri-X 320
Paper & Developer
Ilford MXIV
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None
move the camera view over to the right and cut out the two left fingers of the right hand and include the left breast. Fix the skin tag on the right rear where it globs out. add more or less of the right arm pit. Otherwise it's a very nice classical shot.
 
Classical? Blah. Boring. Dull. Cliche. This composition though adds interest and I like the compositional line of the fingers, the nipple and the breast. I also like the 90 angle between the dark chair and the light thigh and the general subtle tension. I would possibly crop a bit at the bottom but its also fine as it is.
 
Thanks for the comments. I'm not really trying to replicate a formula, although I do look at others' work for ideas. Always lots to learn.
 

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