Hi, could be that the sky should be cropped out. However, the sky looks pretty bad on this scan, but softer in real life. If you are passing through Elk, you can check out my real prints at our gallery here: The Elk Studio Gallery, in downtown Elk. Open every day. We have a photo gallery with several other photographers showing work.
Without the sky you have no real reference to the light, just shadows. So leave it in as far as I'm concerned. Prints always look better than scans (is that stating the obvious, or what?). Dean