I have to agree with Micek that this image doesnt work for me. In fact, between the models expression and the vignetting of the lens, it looks like the image was taken from behind a one way mirror with the subject unaware.
the dip pic thing is something I have often thought about but I think it is quite difficult to achieve. I am not sure I understand the message behind the 2 images. I do like the feel of the work thou, seems fun and light hearted. The look works well also, the old photo thing plus the vignetting makes me feel like I am looking at one of those old stereoscope photos that has gone wrong a bit!