Neil's-Photography196-Edit

Its a wonderful lady but I do not like the for me overloaded background I would have only used f8 to make the background creamy unsharp!

Before I read JohnArs's comment I thought the same thing! Her head is rather ruined by having to compete for attention. Ironically, here skirt does NOT!

Despite f22, and despite the longer lens needed, both do not provide for adequate separation. Perhaps I am nitpicking here, but I wanted to adore this. I almost do. - David Lyga

I think on all these three shots you need to be closer. At least half the distance between the camera and the model and then reformulate the composition.