Great skin tones and lighting, but i'd say that I am more bothered by the face being too centered with a lot of empty space above it than by the "strong" mouth which, to me, seems to be whispering something to the viewer..
Almost good. The lighting is way too flat, a flag on the right side of the image would have given some contrast and contour to the face. The "broken wrist" is upsetting and her fingers look clawlike, they would look much better if her fingers were closed together. That white band that appears between her hair and the left of the image is too distracting. The image could be cropped off about 1 inch above her toes, there is too much "sky" showing that does not add anything to the image. Paul