My next door neighbor Elsa
MenacingTourist

My next door neighbor Elsa

I finally have things set up to go from tripping the shutter to making a print. Would love some feedback on things I should be thinking about or changing or doing better at any point in my process, etc.

Thanks in advance
Location
100 ft from my front door
Equipment Used
Century No. 2 / Petzval projector lens on Packard shutter
Exposure
f4 @ 25
Film & Developer
FP4 (iso 80) / Rollo Pyro 8 minutes
Paper & Developer
Ilford mgrc warmtone Pearl / Dektol
Lens Filter
none
Ah, yes. Toes. I think either moving up the leg or showing the toes would have been better. This way does creat a tangent. This was indeed a garage neg and a bathroom print :smile:
 
I like all of these very much - this one most of all - and I feel that the qualities of the lens coupled with the warmth of the print work very well together. In fact these almost look like lightly toned pop or albumen prints on my monitor. Nice work!
 
Oh my! She has stolen my heart. Another one you can play with masked in the 4X5 frame in the enlarger. Crop her in tighter. She's fantastic.
 
This is really a beautiful image. The toes being cropped out does not bother me at all and I think it works rather well the way it is. One thing you could try is to bleach the face a bit to really draw attention to it and tone down the rest of the image just a tad to really force the eye on the face. Also I would take a bit off the top, the reason is that the white marks n the background compete with her face and distract your attention away from it. The expression is just priceless. Well done.
 

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