My Grandmother
loman

My Grandmother

Any Critique is more than welcome!
Equipment Used
Toyo 810g, 300mm symmar
Exposure
f8, 1/2 second
Film & Developer
fomapan 100 (exposed at 80) aph 09 1+40
Paper & Developer
Adox vario classic, dektol type dev.
Fantastic portrait! One of the best I've seen in a while. It seems so true to her character. The simplicity is elegant, the lighting is perfect.
- Thomas
 
Great character study but it's all in the face. I don't think the arms or shot of her to the waist adds anything.

I think a head and shoulders shot including the front to just above breast line would work better, cutting out the arms and hands altogether.
 
Thanks Everyone for your comments.
Pentaxuser I must admit I disagree completely (luckily for me!)
Best Regards
Mads Hartmann
 

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