You said it yourself "probably my favourite result". I happen to like it as well; so you are 2 up already. My only comment would be to consider burning in the right-hand side to reduce the flare.
This has a really nice, early 20th century feel to it. Dave's right about the upper right side, but that's fixable, I presume. Nicely balanced composition. Only 2 months into MF? You're off to a good start. Dean