My First Attempt... please be patient
pgram

My First Attempt... please be patient

This is my first attempt... i'll be very happy if you will critique my images. I want to learn and i need your advices!
Location
Ozzano, Italy
Equipment Used
Mamiya RB67
Exposure
1/30 F 32
Film & Developer
FP4+, D76
I wonder if something between the 2 might be best of all. Maybe just a tad wider to include more of the conveyor going off to the left, and in square format to keep more of the foreground diagonals. This looks like a subject you can continue to revisit in different seasons and times of day. It would be fun to see how many different and interesting looks you can get. By the way, welcome back to film.
 

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quarry_machinery_2_mr.jpg
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850px x 599px

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