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I have spent this afternoon printing this. It's from last Saturday's 'shoot' at Goose Pond Mountain State Park Wetland. The print 'sings'....this negative scan (the print is too big for the scanner) probably just 'hums'...I hope you like it.
Location
Goose Pond Mountain State Park wetland
Equipment Used
Mamiya C220, 80mm
Film & Developer
HP5+ (out of date) in D76 1:3
I'd say this one is doing the whole sonata...very, very nice....needs to be hanging ASAP.....


Miles
 
A great composition and beautiful light on it. Yes I hear the song too. Very good. Bert
 
There are some elements that work very well -- for example the way the reflection of the clouds balances the forms of the tall water plants.

When I put my thumb over the small bright water plant on the right edge of the image the composition become stronger and more stable...allowing my eye to dance across the tall plants and back round again via the reflected cloud and the reflections of the tall plants. That small plant on the right edge draws my eye off to the right and makes the image off-balanced to my eye.

But as a larger image (as a print) it might work quite different than what I see here.

Vaughn
 

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