Montana De Oro repeat

after some feedback and assistance from fellow APUG chatters, tried again with the same shot I uploaded earlier. This time is better, no?

Used filter #2 this time and got some more depth and blacks are black now.
Location
Montana De Oro State Park, California
Equipment Used
Minolta X-700 with 28-70 mm f3.5 macro zoom
Exposure
f22 @ 1/125
Film & Developer
Ilford Delta 100 with Ilford Ilfosol S
Paper & Developer
Ilford MC RC Glossy, Ilford PQ Universal
Lens Filter
#2
Your grass is too black so hold back on exposure in that area. the sea and sky look fine except fot that LHS. Oh and do check out the horizon, it appears to be falling from left to right. Not to worry we all have pictures with these faults.

Cheers
TEX
 

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