I cannot seem to find constrictive criticism from anywhere or anyone, so I'm hoping someone on APUG will have something to say. Please be impossibly picky.
it is an interesting architectural/built environmental abstraction,
BUT the building is leaning backwards. while it looks OK
you could print it so the building is perpendicular to the top/bottom edge
by tilting the easel and stopping down your enlarger lens all the way ..
or if you have an enlarger with a bellows and allows for lens plane movements
you could fix it that way and stop down.