I like the sitters expression, her beautiful eyes, the soft flattering lighting and the general relaxed feel of this portrait, excellent work congratulations very well done.
Actually, I am going to go against the grain here and say that I don't really care for this pose. Her eyes and nose are at odd angles. One eye is rather flat and the other is darker and yet has a brighter catchlight. Which if you were going for an eerie effect, it would work, but you arent. I am quite surprised that the other image you posed hasn't received many comments. I quite like the other one and I think the pose is much stronger as well. -Except perhaps for the models feet, but that could be cropped out easily enough. I like the the added interest of the truck (?), I like her pose, and I like the translucent dress that hints at her shape. I am not going to guess at the reason this one has received more praise, but maybe I can direct some to the other submission.
Thanks for the input Darin. There was not much time to compose these images I posted. They are more or less snap shots while my daughter coordinated the shoot for grad pics. She did a much better job than I however I was satisfied considering the situation. Again, thanks for the input! Steve