Metz

Taken in Metz, France last August. The facade appealed to me but I am unsure if the appeal is felt by others.
Equipment Used
Mamiya 645
Exposure
-
Film & Developer
HP5+; 160 ASA, in Rodinal 1:100
Paper & Developer
Ilford MGRC, in Neutol
Lens Filter
yellow
I like this image, but would suggest a little less exposure and a bit more contrast. The shutters, in my opinion, make this photo so interesting and should be accentuated.
 
I agree with Don, it needs more contrast
 
I'd move up into the roofing...towards the right. The tile roof look great and create an image of them.
 
Nice idea, very well executed. I would not add contrast because I think this comes closest to what was the original impression.
 

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