Blurry is so right for a morning commute scene. Heavy caffeine, shaken down by a few potholes & things will get more clear, eventually. I hope you do more on the theme. It has potential for a number of views & you'd do them well.
I like it but it doesn't say morning to me. It looks more like late at night and exhausted after work. Mind you, sunrise was 0518 today in the South of the U.K.