Melodie II

I like what you are doing here, but what looks like a clothing tag, does stand out a bit.

Mick.

Now you mention it it does, I should tone that down if I print this neg again. It's a label on the martial arts outfit she's wearing, doesn't look so bad on the real print wher you can see it's not just the price tag!
Thx for commenting, I find it interesting that more people commented on the other portrait of the same model, maybe because it has the classical look, who knows, thanks anyway.