Melaie

Location
Encino
Equipment Used
8 X 10 300mm
Film & Developer
Elfke 100 pmk
Paper & Developer
Azo Ansco 130
Hi Gustavo. Firstly, I like the pose. Very abstract but quite attractive. I'm less keen on the slightly 'muddy' appearance of the skin tones. I think I can see that you've gone for a low-key shot but, for me, there isn't quite as much vibrancy and depth to the shot as there might be with a touch more contrast and brightness in the highlights. Also (and, again, it's just personal taste) I'd crop half of the dead space above the model as it adds nothing to the shot. One to re-print on more contrasty paper, perhaps? Otherwise, a really nice shot. Paul.
 
I quite like this as it is. Staring at it for a while I can imagine the head being at the other end which is quite disconcerting !!

bill
 

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