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garpet

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Looking for feedback on composition more than process as I didn't develop or scan these negatives myself
Equipment Used
Zenit TTL, Industar-50
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Lomography Potsdam/ORWO Film UN 54
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None
Hybrid Materials & Processing
Digitally scanned negative
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Cropping and rescaling
Since you mentioned wanting composition advice, I'd either step back or use a wider lens, point the camera exactly at ground level but so that the top of the building is not cut off, rotate the camera so that the central pipe is vertical. This will cause all vertical lines in the image to become parallel, but lead to a lot of foreground you may want to crop out afterwards.

Alternatively, you could do the same thing but intentionally cut some of the top of the building off. Or do the same with the camera rotated to portrait orientation.

I think the tree's shadow is a very nice element here.
 

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