Nice tones in the dolphins. Are they, and the people, going to leap out the window?? Seriously, is there any detail in the window, and would it be worth a preflash? Of course, maybe a pure white window would be better, can't tell from here...
At that angle, that window just shows Monterey Bay and the sky (looking west). I think it was a bright clear day (no coastal fog), so the contrast was way beyond what general development could handle, and there was nothing of interest beyond the window. I guess some tone could be introduced, but that's all.