Margot relaxing on a sculpture

Location
Pratt Institute, Brooklyn
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Agfa Super Isolette
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TriX, D23
What a great shot - I love the way the oversized hat doesn't quite hide the expression of slight boredom. The crisp shadow just finishes it off.
 
Looks good except I think she has quite a workman-like expression. As if she's about to push home the final spike as in the golden spike joining the trans America railroad. She might have an engineering inclination. The gene isn't confined to males. Pity we've only learned that in the last 10 years or so but plenty of time for her.

pentaxuser
 
Thanks for the comments. Bored indeed. I agree with the empty space on the right Ian, I didn't frame it as it should have been, more of the curve of the sculpture on the left and less emptiness on the right.
CS
 

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