Marazion Dawn

Marazion Dawn

I'm not sure about this one. The light's nice but the composition's pretty lame. I've tried cropping it to a square but I'm not totally convinced. Any suggestions?
Location
Marazion, Cornwall
Equipment Used
Toyo 45A with Schneider Symmar S 150/5.6
Exposure
5 seconds at f/32
Film & Developer
Fuji Velvia 100, lab developed
Paper & Developer
Transparency scan
Lens Filter
81B
Any way you can pull more out of the sky? It's looking as if you've got something there that printed right could add a lot to the comp. BTW.... I love this spot. I can almost smell the air.
 
The interest lies in the foreground and as such I would be inclined to crop off even more of the sky almost down to the the house on the LHS.

Cheers
TEX
 
I'm with Tex on this one. I love the warm feel, but the upper third of the frame doesn't seem to add anything to the whole. I think it would be a lot stronger cropped.

- Randy
 

Media information

Category
Standard Gallery
Added by
bwakel
Date added
View count
382
Comment count
4
Rating
0.00 star(s) 0 ratings

Image metadata

Filename
marazion_dawn.jpg
File size
176.9 KB
Date taken
Sun, 05 October 2008 6:30 PM
Dimensions
640px x 640px

Share this media

Photrio.com contains affiliate links to products. We may receive a commission for purchases made through these links.
To read our full affiliate disclosure statement please click Here.

PHOTRIO PARTNERS EQUALLY FUNDING OUR COMMUNITY:



Ilford ADOX Freestyle Photographic Stearman Press Weldon Color Lab Blue Moon Camera & Machine
Top Bottom