what are the "creases" to the right of the building? Are they wires that have been repositioned during the shot? I can't really figure out what they are. Is this a pinhole photo?
I like it - could you tell us a bit more about how it was made? I'm assuming from the grain structure that this was 35mm, and perhaps cropped. Or did you intentionally shoot it with a high-speed film and/or overdevelop to push the grain out? Was this intentional, or a coincidence of the process of making the shot? Personally I think it could use a bit more contrast - the clouds are too gray and match the tone of the building too closely. I think the image would be more three-dimensional if the clouds separated from the building more. I'm not talking about paper white - just a bit brighter.
@Ces1um Yea they were some kind of wires that were connected to the top of the building, if I recall. No pinhole. Nikon FE2 or Fm2n and I'm guessing a 28mm lens.
@TheFlyingCamera Yep 35mm Nikon - Tri-x. Cropped ever-so-slightly to straighten. I have also thought it could use a bit more contrast - I'll work on that some tonight and see what I come up with. I'd like to see it printed as well, because it's on paper that I can really come to terms with appropriate contrast unique to each image. Thanks for the suggestions.
Not sure if you're printing it yourself or having a lab do it, but the lab I use offers a metallic paper. It really makes contrasted areas pop. Sometimes it can be overkill and it's really designed for colour but some black and white prints look really nice with it. I think using this metallic paper on your image would really make the building pop out from the clouds in the background as the paper tends to accentuate edges. Wouldn't be a bad idea to get a proof print made first of it though.