I like the dark and warm brown look but this may be my monitor and/or your neg scan. I think the pic suits this look but a straight print in a normal dev will, I fear, fail to replicate this look. Pity. Some toning and experimentation may be called for.
This is amazing work, and should make a spectacular print. Would work well on EMAKS paper, bleached, sepia toned, and finished in selenium to get that colour and look.
Eddie, this really holds fantastic mood and a sense of mystery. The juxtaposition between the big industrial scene in the background and the quiet boating in the foreground is splendid. Two worlds in one. Really nice job!