Hi.Thank you !! This is really a very nice place. I'll try to repeat the photo but with a Portra 160 ... I've another version, one I shot with my Contax and the CZ Planar 1.7. No deal !!! I think the film (Argenti APX 100), developer (Studio R09) and development (11', 10 seconds of slow agitation every minute) were not good. ..Thanks again Regards from SpainPD: sorry for my english. I understand and read very well but, unfourtunately I seldom have the chance to speak or write
An interesting start. In my opinion, the focal point is the small clump of dark trees on the right side. I would be tempted to crop of a little of the bottom to create more tension from them. They are pulling your eye there now but I'd crop a bit more off the bottom to seal the deal. Also the burning in seems to visible on the bottom and the left side all the way up to the clouds. I'd clean that up. And darken the bottom slightly. You could pull an Ansel and add more contrast to the clouds, darken the hills, lighten the white in the clouds and mess with the highlight and shadows on the fields as well. This picture has a lot of possibilities and you are just beginning.
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