Hi Bill, posting it in the critique gallery I'd like to comment if you don't mind. Personally I'd love to see the shape of her beautiful female body more on an angle, showing the curve of her hips. Bring her around a little, showing slightly more of (the small of) her back and turn her face slightly to the left to show more of her face - or turn her face slightly further away so to avoid the "bumps" on the horizon. She has beautiful hair, I'd have a wayward lock or two falling out. Composition: like Dietmar Wolf suggested, a (slight) crop from the top.
Bill, please take my thoughts with a grain of salt. My suggestions are just what I'd do. Beautiful work as always!
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