Keep Out - AZ Workshop

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  MarkL

• Oct 31, 2006

Yeah, lots of lines and shadows - nice image. Looks like you got some sun flare in the upper left. If you can, try to put a shadow on the front of your lens by holding something up (but out of the frame hopefully!).

 

• Donald Miller

• Oct 31, 2006

Really interesting patchwork, Jeanette. I remember this.

 

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  Shawn Dougherty

• Oct 31, 2006

Yes, this is quite nice. The patchwork of texture and tone is wonderful and I especially like the light grass in the foreground.

I think it would be worth burning down the flare in the upper left. It's a bit distracting but I think it would be easily tamed.

Nice work. Best. Shawn

 

• BWGirl

• Nov 1, 2006

Thanks for the comments! I was smitten by this building & I am still working on pulling out what I saw. Your comments are quite helpful!

 

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  Juraj Kovacik

• Nov 5, 2006

Yes, it is a nice work, and yes, tah left upper flare should be burned