benjiboy Mar 14, 2006 Much better than the shot in the critique gallery, she is a beautiful girl, although I'm Not keen on the white halter top of her dress round her neck that takes your eyes away from her face that in a portrait should be the main centre of interest .
Much better than the shot in the critique gallery, she is a beautiful girl, although I'm Not keen on the white halter top of her dress round her neck that takes your eyes away from her face that in a portrait should be the main centre of interest .
AeisLugh Mar 14, 2006 I wasn't overly fond of the outfit myself, at least not for the indoors shots I did of her. The other outfit suited the surroundings so much better.
I wasn't overly fond of the outfit myself, at least not for the indoors shots I did of her. The other outfit suited the surroundings so much better.
jtwalthier Mar 16, 2006 I like this portrait. The eyes drill right into you. More than the halter top, I find the blue line on the lower right distracting.
I like this portrait. The eyes drill right into you. More than the halter top, I find the blue line on the lower right distracting.
AeisLugh Mar 16, 2006 Thanks, jtwalthier You're right, it is distracting. I'm not sure if a tighter crop to eliminate it would spoil the photo or not though. I'll play with it a bit and see.
Thanks, jtwalthier You're right, it is distracting. I'm not sure if a tighter crop to eliminate it would spoil the photo or not though. I'll play with it a bit and see.