I think the Coca Cola sign balances out its side of the image, and sort of relates to the glass on the table. I particularly enjoy the beautiful highlight on your subject's face and hair, that draws attention to her and relegates everything else in the image to a secondary role. Very nice portrait.
I like all the elements in the photo which are composed well but also having the main subject shine and the rest toned down so much, nothing comes out as a distraction, like FirePhoto mentioned. I love her pensive expression which goes well with the environment.
What a wonderfully intriguing portrait. The light on her face is lovely, and the bored gesture with the mundane glass and coke sign give it an almost surreal environment. Makes me start to ask questions. Is she waiting for someone? Tired? Ready to go home?
The more I look at it, the more perfect I think it going to get. I had some initial suggestions, but all that feels like silly nitpick now. Well done. I love the light on the face and the glass.
Thanks everybody. I like the expression of the model too. It was quite a surprise. During the shoot, the model got sick (probably because of being 6 months pregnant). If she's waiting for something, it's probably for going home. So Suzanne is very close I guess...
About the film used, I made a mistake: this is Delta 100 not Delta 400. The print was briefly dipped in selenium.