Irina
Dwayne Martin

Irina

Location
Sarasota Florida
Equipment Used
Speed Graphic Aero Ektar combo
Exposure
Probably 1/125
Film & Developer
FP4 125 in D-76 1:1 in a Jobo
Paper & Developer
Scan
Lens Filter
none
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  1. Yes
Face and expression are beautiful.
But the way the body is placed is weird.... what happened to her lower leg? This looks rather awkward, like amputated.
Hands are always a challenge... her right arm and hand are OK, the way she leans on it is quite natural and looks good. But the left hand, supporting her head with her fingertips, looks unnatural. Hands look best from the side, not from the front or back. Would the left arm have rested on the floor, like crossing her right arm, it would have been much better. That would als have given a better view on her long and beautifaul hair, especially with a bit more light on it.
 
Beautiful light -- I have this camera and lens and just haven't used it, and this image is so lovely it makes me feel badly for that.
Not sure about the posing but the light is wonderful. Background is cool, to my eye.
 
Thanks for the time everyone I appreciate it. I placed this image here because the lack of foreground was bothering me but the light on her face was so nice, I was torn so I was wondering what you guys might think.
Thanks again,
Dwayne
 
Sharpness and lighting both shift suddenly from body to face...it's like the face is pasted over the body...
 

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